Since I handed my draft of my Front Page to a group of assessors, they pointed out a number of problems with it, one being that all the text was in straight boxes unlike my research for Mixmag, so instead I have changed it round in order to have the texts coming from the sides. Another thing was that the text was all the same font, and so I changed this to fit in with my research more. Lastly, on my draft there was no price that could be identified on the front page, so I have put one in to make it look more realistic.
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