Final Draft of Double Page Spread

After giving my draft of my double page spread to a group of assessors, They pointed out a number of problems. One of these being that it was all in caps, so I have changed this and although all are still in caps, they look lower case and I believe this font suits the article. I have also added in a bleed for my text so it doesn't run over the page which is another thing they picked up on. I have also added in a piece of text advertising the Vinyls Twitter. Lastly, I've changed the text to size 10 which is what professional magazine designers use for texts on double page spreads, as this was something they pointed out also.